Wild Birds

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I am an Ibis, a wading bird. Times have become quite absurd. My family used to enjoy the wetlands. The cool fresh water answered all our demands. The global weather patterns have all changed. The water situation is definitely rearranged. Water in our habitat did just deteriorate. Forcing us to fly east and migrate. We all made homes in each city. Which is really now such a pity. Our search for water is sad. Our future is pretty bad.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 3:50:00 PM

Back with huge congratulations my friend Svvie! :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/25/2023 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, sweetest Las.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/23/2023 5:16:00 PM

congrts SV on placing in my contest and what a good bird to chose the Ibis is beautiful and needs our protection Hugs Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/25/2023 12:34:00 PM

too true I love to see birds free and wild

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/25/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Shadow. Yes its a pity to see the poor things scrounging to find food in garbage bins.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 6:33:00 PM

Amazing how nature can co-exist in Urbania. Sad for the beautiful guys, that they have not integrated well. Thoth has always been a favorite of mine - god of knowledge, writing, wisdom, and scribes. A great way to bring the issue to fore! :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/6/2023 7:40:00 PM

Thanks my dear Friend.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 11/3/2023 1:33:00 AM

This is a good poem. Well written

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/3/2023 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Jeanette. Your comment is truly welcomed. Best wishes from SV