Wife Seeing Husband Growing Older

WIFE  SEEING  HUSBAND  GROWING   OLDER
 
Water steals your reflection when you are young
And as fast as cat’s feet on a glass roof.
The ripples replace none of your image -
Waves chiseled from moving marble hide the boats coming home.

Through the thickness of your old age I sometimes  see your young guy hiding inside
The massive greyness of March in the city.
Gods sense of humor   at pathetic human activities
Is a liquid mystery.

This starlit world is a lonely place and it misses you  -
The waving Milky Way waiting for you to swim in, waist  high
Through the radiant white daisy stars, across the  soft black meadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 17, 2015 at 4:39 PM
A very creative and imaginative imagery is reflected throughout your poem. A 7 from me!
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