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Wide Open Sky

Can you hear me spirits that flows in air....
I swear to you that the love we have is so rare..
Can you hear me wide open sky ?
He's the one that with him I shall die...
Can you witness my lovely stars on my vow ?
Can you hear me when I swear to never let him go ...
When I swear to always stay by his side...
Even through the sickness - even through the blind...
With his hold I'll wipe away my tears...
And with his love I'll push away my fears...
I'll always contain his whispers - his touch - his love inside of me...
He's my past and my future , he is what I was and what I will be...
As the endless sky will be my love..
Even if I had to die that won't be enough..
He's my soul that I can't share...
That is how far I do care..
I want us to be not two but one..
I want him to be my moon at the  night and in the morning my sun..
So can you believe me my lovely stars ? Can you believe my heart? 
Can you believe that he's the one who can heal my scares ? Can you feel his dart ?
Cause if you do my lovely stars then you will know that our love is true...
And that will mean that there's no more walls for us to break through...
And this is the end that I'll write...
It couldn't be wrong when I know it's right...

Copyright © Dalia Shahein | Year Posted 2015

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White Sage Date: 1/26/2016 4:43:00 AM it couldn't be wrong when we feel it's right...but we wake up and discover reality is different, i'll prefer to continue closing my eyes though, will you too?.....well written Dalia, life is a sequence of different themes... Login to Reply Dalia Shahein Date: 1/26/2016 12:31:00 PM Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment, I appreciate it as I appreciate your amazing feedback , hugs / / :) Dalia Shahein Date: 1/26/2016 12:31:00 PM Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment, I appreciate it as I appreciate your amazing feedback , hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner Date: 12/24/2015 2:27:00 AM The wind does know the lift of your breast as you confess the breaths of love, the stars that catch the light of your tears and the heat of your eyes shine for the history of united souls, this love is more than right Dalia, it is perfect in it's burning purpose. I love the sound of your heart's voice Violet Poetess...J.A.B. Login to Reply Dalia Shahein Date: 12/25/2015 7:02:00 PM Thanks alot my dear Justin for ur incredible wards , I can feel them coming from ur heart , it is ur wards that keeps me motivated and inspired to write , u set fire to my soul to the very deep down....I'm glad to have u as a friend , as a role model poet and as a great reader , ur opinion means alot for me....Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/21/2015 1:33:00 PM - I like this .... so lovely written, Dalia :) - Marry Christmas to you and your family - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dalia Shahein Date: 12/21/2015 1:40:00 PM I'm glad you liked it my dear...and I wish you a happy, lovely , sweet merry Christmas for you and for all of your beloved one's...lot of love and hugs...// :)

Michael Whatley Date: 12/21/2015 12:52:00 PM An powerful, passionate, and personal-sounding expression. Not my area of expertise, but a delicate piece no less. I was particularly interested by line 12. Login to Reply Dalia Shahein Date: 12/21/2015 1:38:00 PM Thank you very much my dear friend for ur lovely feedback and ur sweet sweet delightful words I'm really grateful and thankful for ur sweetness....lot of hugs and merry Christmas...//