Reason A. Poteet Poet Haiku

Wide Eyes, Ears Up

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wide-eyes, ears up
wax statues in the brush
danger lumbers past

baby deer
on a gambol in the snow
instinct kicks in

holding its breath
fawn awaits mother's nod
eye contact

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Delysia Hendricks May 30, 2013 at 5:56 PM Congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend. Licia :-)

Connie Gildersleeve May 24, 2013 at 7:33 PM I love the beautiful scene in your Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun May 23, 2013 at 11:08 PM A fantastic haiku! I love it! Big congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend Reason! love and big hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts May 23, 2013 at 1:33 AM Congrats Reason ....Seren

John Posey May 22, 2013 at 5:37 PM Well done, my friend. Congrads on your win.... Jake

Seosamh De Burca May 22, 2013 at 1:09 PM I like your Haiku, congrats on your win and best wishes. S.

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2013 at 9:13 AM awe so sweet....Reason, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA

Shadow Hamilton May 21, 2013 at 8:14 AM my kind of poem I love nature and you well portray the actions of a young fawn frozen with fear fine pen