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Wide Eyes, Ears Up

haiku

wide-eyes, ears up
wax statues in the brush
danger lumbers past

baby deer
on a gambol in the snow
instinct kicks in

holding its breath
fawn awaits mother's nod
eye contact

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/30/2013 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:33:00 PM
I love the beautiful scene in your Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:08:00 PM
A fantastic haiku! I love it! Big congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend Reason! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/23/2013 1:33:00 AM
Congrats Reason ....Seren
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Date: 5/22/2013 5:37:00 PM
Well done, my friend. Congrads on your win.... Jake
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Date: 5/22/2013 1:09:00 PM
I like your Haiku, congrats on your win and best wishes. S.
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Date: 5/22/2013 9:13:00 AM
awe so sweet....Reason, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 5/21/2013 8:14:00 AM
my kind of poem I love nature and you well portray the actions of a young fawn frozen with fear fine pen
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