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Wicked World

There, in the ocean of fire lies my dark desire if I said I were strong enough to resist I would be a LIAR. Insatiable hunger festers inside from myself I can not hide against weak walls I punch and kick deep down I know I am sick. But, what is a man without struggle whom against fate he must tussle trying to be righteous and good within to force myself to abstain from sin.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2016 10:05:00 PM

Andrick B., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tim Smith

Date: 7/26/2016 6:34:00 AM

Wow how did you make the word Liar bold...you must have written here before...under what name?

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2016 11:47:00 AM

hmmmm I could hazard a guess lol:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2016 12:22:00 AM

Andrick .. I like how you put the word liar in bold letters ..skat

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2016 12:21:00 AM

Andrick,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**