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Wicked

buried here beneath this veritable verdant sod lies another one © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/18/2019 12:42:00 PM

A most touching, and masterful senryu! You rock, Harry! Love and hugs. Pandita

Funom Makama

Date: 9/9/2019 10:31:00 AM

Your lines expectedly weigh in tonnes and your consistency has made you a master of masters in this act. This is beyond compliments. Good work mate. An absolute beauty.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2019 5:38:00 AM

the word play with sod made me smile Harry, I can think of a few who this relates to ... very cleverly penned:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/2/2019 12:57:00 AM

Bold and sharp.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/31/2019 1:36:00 PM

I envy poets who can write with such clarity and brevity, Harry! This is my second post on this one.)) Making it a FAV Panagiota

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/19/2019 12:51:00 AM

Excellent. Love it Harry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/18/2019 5:02:00 PM

I love the cryptic tone to this senryu Harry. I see it as the wicked burying the victim. Excellent! : ) xxoo

Silent One

Date: 7/17/2019 4:37:00 PM

Sad one...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/15/2019 5:28:00 PM

Very haunting and thought provoking PR

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 7/15/2019 4:53:00 PM

The past supposed to be buried... Some people too. Love the layering like a burial. Intense work!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2019 4:09:00 PM

- ... gone ... and forgotten ... - Excellent - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2019 2:06:00 PM

A Creative, mysterious write, there will always be another wicked one to join the one who lies there. A thought provoking write Harry - clever as always. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/11/2019 9:01:00 AM

Yes that is indeed true. A sobering thought.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2019 8:50:00 AM

Well, sad that some never change but that is the way life goes. Enjoyed reading your work. Very creative. Thanks for dropping by..Sara..I have written a short story that might be interesting since you have written this one. I have posted it on poetrysoup.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/8/2019 9:21:00 AM

The layered labyrinth...great write my friend...sending drilling equipment...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/7/2019 6:25:00 PM

I'd say the wicked one is burying some bodies. Time to find the location! Mysterious and thought provoking Harry :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2019 5:17:00 PM

This could be a funny one or not. I think it depends on how we take it. I am wondering if it's a murder mystery! and I am hoping it's the wicked who was killed and not an innocent victim of the wicked! Hello, Harry. I enjoyed your comment today and am always happy to see you here.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2019 5:05:00 PM

I find this hilarious. Not sure it was intended to be, but what I can say. I'm grinning like a chesire cat. :) gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/7/2019 11:35:00 AM

Does he have a name...The wicked one...You had me wondering ...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/7/2019 10:21:00 AM

Haha loved it Harry.