Wichita Mountains

Up in the mountains
See the animals below
See the cars down there
It is very cold up here
In the Wichita Mountains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Esquire Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Dear Elizabeth,WOW YOU are a POET Laureate in my Heart, Soul, and Mind I bow to YOU and give to YOU the Golden Pen of POETRY LOVE, ALWAYS...HG
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February 13, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Elizabeth, as a Floridian, I envy the chill you feel in the Wichita Mountains. Great use of the verse form! Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Wonderful work with this piece...love the picture of the mountain that this is giving me..very good work.
Gass Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Lovely Tanka, Elizabeth. Even if it is cold it must be beautiful! Great write. Love, Robin
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February 8, 2009 at 6:17 PM
I can picture looking down from the mountain and seeing those things below...and brrrrrrr
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