Whys Don’t Wise Me Up

What do I know, what do I know of you, Lord?
I know what you divulge. I know if I dig deep enough.
I’m not required to take a shovel, but to trust you,
as if that friend that waits to catch me as I fall.
You do catch me, even if I don’t see the effect.
Whys don’t wise me up, but between the cracks
you expose the deeper things and fruit matures
instead of weeds.  L  O  V  E
                                        is the greatest produce.
     J  O  Y ~
                   happiness within our hope.
                                                      P  E  A  C  E
   that passes ALL understanding…
                    P  A  T  I  E  N  C  E
         under pressure, as we wait for the greater reward,
for our hearts want to jump too quickly.
               God’s slowness is mercy.         K  I  N  D  N  E  S  S
                                                  toward our
                                         fellow
                                   man
G  O  O  D  N  E  S  S   not of our own making, but His.
                                      G  E  N  T  L  E  N  E  S  S ~
               that spot-on touch from heaven
                    that wipes all tears
                         that quietly holds a friend or stranger’s hand.
            F  A  I  T  H  F  U  L  N  E  S  S ~
                                         showing up, every time, at least
in thought or prayer, but yes, oh yes, showing up between
     the cracks, when time stands still, when the clock won’t
          q
            u
              i
               t
                                                         and
when you want to binge, scream, die, keep an eye on
                      S  E  L  F  ~ C  O  N  T  R  O  L.   You are not
   in control, but the Spirit of God
          will catch your lows
               carry you high
                     into His bosom
                          where you lay your head
                                and He dries ALL your tears
                                     and He washes your robe in  HIS  blood
                                           that WHITE robe, precious.

                           Lest we forget, HE is our happily-ever-after.

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Date: 6/2/2025 1:25:00 AM
Wonderful Kim. He does provide joy, peace, kindness, mercy, etc.. through the power of the Holy Spirit.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2025 5:21:00 AM
Amen! What was cool - I wrote this “Fruit of the Spirit poem, Sunday before church and guess what the Pastor was talking about! Happens to me often. God is good to smile upon us!
Date: 6/1/2025 11:49:00 AM
So inspiring- you seem to say the fruits of the Spirit help us live, when there's so much darkness- beautiful work, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 6/1/2025 11:07:00 AM
What a powerful/creative write you have here. Great and True Ending.... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/1/2025 7:55:00 AM
So beautiful, very creative and very uplifting my dear poet friend Kim. I love this poem and goes to my fave. Thanks a lot for sharing your gorgeous poetry and superb poetic talent. God bless you always. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 1:01:00 PM
Then I went to church and the Pastor was talking about the fruits of the Spirit. God is good! Thank you for the fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 12:59:00 PM
Then I went to church and the Pastor was talking about the fruits of the Spirit. God is good! Thank you for the fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 12:57:00 PM
Then I went to church and the Pastor was talking about the fruits of the Spirit. God is good! Thank you for the fave!
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