Why the Willow Weeps

From seed to sapling it grew non-stop
On the tall majestic Mountain’s top
It spread its boughs and sank its roots
Deep into it’s fertile boots
But fear it did, though strong and stout
“What if the rains cease an’ begins a drought”

Soon it sheltered friends who came,
Shared its bounty all the same
Wood and branch, leaf and nut,
An’ a hollowed trunk, the squirrels cut.
But fear it did, though huge and healthy
“Will this land stay sound and wealthy”

As the years swept by the mountains stock . . .
Landslides, mud-slides, soil and rock
Sheared of gravel Lose of friend
All alone it began to extend
But fear it did, for soon it plain
All of its friends chose to abstain

Over the side of the now craggy cliff
Full of worry and in a tiff
Its crown became crooked, twisted and knurled
Its knotted trunk,lumped with burl
Full with fear, though holding on;
“What will happen when I am gone?”

Bent from storms, reaped in pain
It teetered against the wind and rain,
On a few scraggy roots, all it had left
Deeply tucked, into the barren cleft.
And fear it did, all the more
“What does the Lord have in store?”

On the brink of disaster, the end of its keep
It’s shadow discovered, and it began to weep
And as it wept, for a hundred years
It soon discovered, It had lost its fear!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2014 7:50:00 AM
I also a fascinated by the lone trees, I believe some call them Mother trees, would you give me permission to write my own verse using yours as inspiration? Light & Love
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Date: 12/31/2013 6:18:00 PM
Very good message in this nicely metered poem of yours!! I love the ending!! Welcome to Soup!
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Date: 12/31/2013 12:08:00 PM
Those old solitary trees have given me many poems, glad to see someone else loves them. Welcome to soup. Light & Love
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Date: 12/31/2013 11:23:00 AM
Excellent poem and inspirational message. Well done. Welcome to the soup :)
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Date: 12/30/2013 10:16:00 PM
I am so glad Francine pointed me here. Awesome job with flow, imagery and lovely, just lovely. Keep writing. :)
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Date: 12/30/2013 10:02:00 PM
I love this, I'm always partial to rhyme with a good story, You did a great job
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