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why the ocean flows

I think I know why the ocean flows* to keep our sweet souls in touch with those who once we knew on another sphere with memories of love that we hold dear We sit astride as we catch a ride upon galloping white horses we dip we dive surrounded by her cloak of blue so free are we on her ever changing hue On reaching our place this place where they go Is it Paradise ~ Utopia Oh no that’s not so For our special place is much better by far a magical place we call Shangri-La… *taken from a poem written by Vijay Pandit titled 'I think I know why the ocean flows' Written 14th April 2020 Contest Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup poet - Vijay Pandit Sponsor Silent One 2nd PLACE Contest Strand Pick 12 Sponsor Brian Strand 1st PLACE

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Date: 5/6/2020 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on placing first and second. Good show, Ann Panagiota xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/8/2020 7:16:00 AM
Bless you dear friend I always appreciate your visits and I thank you Panagiota. Love to you and her Maj ^~^ ....xxx
Date: 5/3/2020 6:35:00 AM
Sounds lovely Ann.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/3/2020 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much SO for my placement in your contest. I adore the sea so to write about her was a joy. Thank you too for sponsoring and judging the contest SO. Keep well SO. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/20/2020 3:23:00 PM
Nice one Ann, showing great imagery with a good expression too. Hope you're well, keep safe, Blessings always, Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2020 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Keep well and safe. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/16/2020 7:26:00 PM
Your imagery makes this metaphoric write regal my friend.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2020 2:57:00 PM
Gosh such a wonderful comment dear Caren your words of encouragement mean so much to me. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/16/2020 3:20:00 PM
An ocean of spirituality that few know its tides. Excellent work dearest, Ann. Hugs xxx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thank you dear Demetrios as usual your wonderful comments are almost like poetry themselves. Wonderful... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/14/2020 4:28:00 PM
Delightful poem Ann--a joy to read. Congrats on your first place win in Brian's contest.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/14/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay so glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you for your lovely comments. I hope you are keeping well and safe dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/14/2020 1:04:00 PM
You were inspired well Ann, hope you're well. Stay safe. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/14/2020 3:50:00 PM
I certainly was Tom, and thank you for your visit. I am trying to keep well, so fingers crossed! Hope you and your family are keeping safe too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx