Why Suzie Laughed

“Your undies I see,” joked Wong Ling
as his girlfriend swang high on a swing.
Suzie laughed and she laughed,
saying, “You are so daft,
‘cause down there I’m not wearing a thing!”

Dec. 30, 2018 for the 'Bawdy Limerick ' Poetry Contest of Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pappadogiannis Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Wha ha ha.... Awesome!!!! Congrats on your win Andrea :) x
May Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:19 AM
Haha...Congrats on your win Andrea..
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Very, very good Andrea! I loved your entry. Congrats on your win! : ) xxoo
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Ha ha, what a cute and clever limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Mcferran Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 12:46 PM
This is adorably bawdy! Great work, my friend! ;D
Sergi Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Hi Andrea; A beautiful bawdy limerick. I wish you and yours a very happy new year! I'll send you that collaboration idea for you to check....Ralph
Cozart Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Very cute and funny.
Messina Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 5:40 AM
LOL Oops...Too funny! Best wishes for a win Andrea. I hope you had a nice Christmas and I wish you a very joyful and Happy New Year hugs Charlie
Horn Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:37 PM
With her a bra would bring, She liked more than thing; While there, Both share; Breasts out will not spring.
Lawless Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 5:40 PM
...well, grooming does matter.....
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 4:19 PM
ha ha ha very witty and bawdy too!:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 3:26 PM
That is so hilarious..I am laughing out loud..excellent in every way. A sure win, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Haha great Lim Andrea, this should do well. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 2:56 PM
- ..... nothing at all :))) - A fun limerick, Andrea :) - Luck in the contest ... wish I was good at writing limerick - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 2:55 PM
This is hilarious, and one of the best entries I have read so far!! Bawdy but clean! Wishing you Love, good health and lots of inspiration for the new Year!! // paul
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