Why Still Try

Imagine still thinking
There’s some way
To please everyone
It’s simply impossible
No matter how we try
It can’t be done

There are people who
Live to kibosh dreams
They lurk in the dark
They’re everywhere
And can’t be avoided

Keep your face to the sun
Chase your dreams
Follow your star
Realize your destiny
Be proud and live your life
To please yourself



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on October 27, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/28/2018 4:36:00 PM
After all things, the cheer must come from inside!
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Date: 10/28/2018 6:18:00 PM
Absolutely, Kim. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/28/2018 6:05:00 AM
to make fly far and afar // lovely written
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Date: 10/28/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mahtab.
Date: 10/27/2018 9:29:00 PM
Beautifully stated- had to FAV this! ;)
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Date: 10/27/2018 10:36:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Rhona.
Date: 10/27/2018 9:12:00 PM
Yup, great message: It's such a shame to waste one's life worried about what others think. :) gw
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Date: 10/27/2018 10:37:00 PM
Indeed, thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 10/27/2018 9:08:00 PM
So true Miss Line. I wish I knew that many years ago
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Date: 10/27/2018 10:37:00 PM
Absolutely, youth is wasted on the young. LOL
Date: 10/27/2018 3:55:00 PM
I was congratulating my granddaughter once on painting a glorious canvas that said "be you." She laughed. Many moons later I realized that I have painted over fifteen canvases that say "be you". This poem reminded me of that, Line.
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Date: 10/27/2018 7:06:00 PM
Awesome, Caren. Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment.
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