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Why Leave So Soon?

My darling girl, why leave this world so soon
when brilliance of your sun has not reached noon?
My precious girl, why did you say goodbye?
In bloom of youth, you were not meant to die

Your smile could charm the angels up above
Your words were soft and gentle, filled with love
Your eyes could sparkle brighter than a star
Why take the hand of Death and travel far?

When you were here, we longed to be near you
There was a sweetness there and comfort too
Your presence filled our hearts with happiness,
for in your soul resided tenderness

God loved you, so He spared you tears and woe
You're safe within His arms, this much I know!
This world has nothing more than pain to give
When Christ returns, eternal life you'll live

You are at peace; we are the ones in strife
Who'll take the place of daughter, sister, wife?
The burden of your loss is hard to bear
We miss your warmth and tender-hearted care

But Death will one day die, and we will see
you rise in glory, Queen of Victory!
On Resurrection Day, in warm embrace
we'll hold you close and kiss your angel face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Callus Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Dear Eileen, I have seen the photo, read the poem and the comments, and my heart aches at the loss of such a lovable person who was still in the prime of life. And yet there is consolation in knowing that she was spared more suffering, and the fact that she rests in eternal peace. Hugs dear friend // paul
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December 17, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Hi Eileen….how incredibly beautiful and sad! Touch my heart….Debx
Situation Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Students are kids too.
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:49 PM
I'm lost for words..in such situations Dear Eileen..I hope this beautiful flower is not a family member because the pain would be hundred times more to bear..How hard it is for us to lose somebody..The only comfort is found in our faith,and knowing that this life is nothing but a passage to a better life.Heartwrenching sweet Eileen.Big Hugs
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:28 PM
Honestly Elieen,this news pains my heart,because she is still so young,it's so hard to find my faith in such situations, but I have to ,or else this spul and heart gets heavier.So sorry for your loss sweet lady.
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Mariane was my student. A sweeter, gentler soul one could not find. I posted this poem on her Facebook page when I found out a year or so ago. I believe Covid was the culprit because she had underlying health issues. She had recently gotten married and had her whole future aheadof her. Heartbreaking...even till today, it's hard to believe she's gone. Thank you for sharing in the pain of loss with me.
Situation Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 9:45 AM
I want to give it to someone.
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Please feel free to do so.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Both beautiful and oh so sad. I don’t recognize the lady in the photo. I hope it’s not one of your family members or friends. Hugs Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Sorry for such a tragic outcome. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:19 PM
A beloved student. I can't describe the shock of finding out that she has passed away. It was devastating. Imagine what it was like for her husband, sister, and parents. Such a tragic loss of a beautiful kind soul. Mariane was really a special young lady. She will never be forgotten. Thanks for taking the time to read and post.
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 4:40 AM
aww Eileen this is so heartbreaking, such a touching piece, I can't imagine the pain of losing a child of any age - our friend's lost both their sons in 2014 .. their ashes were blasted into space last month:-( hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:53 PM
I'm so sorry for the loss of your friends, Jan. Losing a child must be the worst pain there is. I just don't know how parents can deal with it and still survive. Mariane was newly married and had her whole life ahead of her. The only consolation is that she doesn't feel any pain anymore. Thanks for commenting and reaching out to me. Big hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 3:19 AM
- Oh my dear friend...this was deeply heartbreaking...a parent's nightmare to lose their child...(hope it's not from reality) - Beautifully written in your words, Eilleen - hugs
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Yes it is, dear. Mariane was my student. Her parents must have been devastated when it happened. I'm sure they are still trying to cope. She was so beautiful and full of life. This is a tribute to a life gone too soon.
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