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Girl, Sleep, Female, Woman, Young

Why Is a Dream So Fragile

Why is a dream so fragile?
breaking with the dawn,
drying up like water
from a stagnant, fetid pond

Why is a dream made of promise?
floating away like a seed,
vanishing with the daylight
with all deliberate speed

Why does it feel so restful?
in the fragility of a dream
that ends like smoke in the wind.
Was it here or did it seem?

Why can’t a dream just linger?
like a saying in your head
repeating over and over
the same thing that’s been said

Why can’t a dream just last?
throughout sunlight of the day
instead of being the moonlight scene
that flashes and goes away

Why is a dream the impossible?
daring reality
appearing in the midnight sleep
possessing fragility.

5/17/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/27/2020 2:38:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/27/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thanks very much Anne.
Date: 5/27/2020 1:22:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Janis :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 5:02:00 AM
I think all intangible things are fragile, love the opening to this poem, it is again, like others that finished first, so philosophical.. I can see you have been inspired with this theme... just brilliant.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/27/2020 4:34:00 PM
it was a good contest and I dream too much......thanks for the honored placement.
Date: 5/18/2020 12:05:00 AM
What a picturesque journey of the highs and lows of dreams. All the best with this beautiful creation Janis :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/27/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes.
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