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Girl, Sleep, Female, Woman, Young

Why is a dream so fragile? breaking with the dawn, drying up like water from a stagnant, fetid pond Why is a dream made of promise? floating away like a seed, vanishing with the daylight with all deliberate speed Why does it feel so restful? in the fragility of a dream that ends like smoke in the wind. Was it here or did it seem? Why can’t a dream just linger? like a saying in your head repeating over and over the same thing that’s been said Why can’t a dream just last? throughout sunlight of the day instead of being the moonlight scene that flashes and goes away Why is a dream the impossible? daring reality appearing in the midnight sleep possessing fragility. 5/17/20

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:38:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/27/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thanks very much Anne.
Date: 5/27/2020 1:22:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Janis :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 5:02:00 AM
I think all intangible things are fragile, love the opening to this poem, it is again, like others that finished first, so philosophical.. I can see you have been inspired with this theme... just brilliant.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/27/2020 4:34:00 PM
it was a good contest and I dream too much......thanks for the honored placement.
Date: 5/18/2020 12:05:00 AM
What a picturesque journey of the highs and lows of dreams. All the best with this beautiful creation Janis :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/27/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes.

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