Why I Loved Cd's Poem: Trapped In the Human Mind

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*Image of Hand Sea Water by Pixabay. AUDIO: Thoughts Why I loved CD's poem: Trapped in the Human Mind Sliding out of consciousness Spreading dreamland wings Look down A labyrinth of roads Covers earth’s frozen ground Slipping slowly to earth Touching down on a highway maze See “drivers” Those who know not where to turn Trapped, web-defeated travelers Standing still Absorbing the futile frenzy Keep sight Of important goals Hope the path you choose is right ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ Knowing life Bearing no end of our own Up until Our conscious wake Good or bad the strength is mine. I added the final stanza as a blessing of the endless light Carolyn shares, ... till we meet again Carolyn, Aloha! 2021 August 22 *1st Place* Celebrating Carolyn's Poetry: An Uncontest Andrea Dietrich: Judged 2021 September 19

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/22/2021 3:25:00 AM

Her love of the sea,show by the hand William,neat orm o this poem

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/23/2021 6:00:00 PM

Brian, a heartfelt thanks for your praise, my friend! I'm glad for your visit, share, and the silence that emanates, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2021 4:00:00 PM

I will start looking for Carolyn tribute poems today so I can post the list quickly when my "uncontest" closes out by next weekend. William , you chose such a thoughtful poem here written by Carolyn. I enjoyed how you added your own stanza at the end as your poetic contribution. The music is also so pretty that you put with her poetry. Thanks so much for sharing!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/11/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, as 'sharing' constants the good in us all, to our beloved Carolyn, Aloha!