Why I Loved C D's Poem

A Different Kind of Courage

Sam took to the stage, limping with a leg brace
And more than a mere trace of fear on his face
The humorous speech competition was on
He’d made it to finals, prior contests he’d won

Sam’s lifelong bout with muscular dystrophy
Generated sadness and much empathy
He shook and stammered as he started to speak
Competitors thought his composure he’d breach

“Stage fright is shared by many,” the boy explained
And as he began, his eye contact seemed strained
We wanted to rush to his side, offer aid
Little did we know Sam’s point was being made

He’d soon have us laughing at the “crutches” WE use
To gain courage when stage fright ensues
“I’m picturing you all naked,” he laughed, smiled
Soon his sharp wit had us rolling in the aisle

His strength and confidence built fast as he spoke
Sam finished up with a memorable poke:
“You thought I would fail; I read it in your eyes
Seeing only my handicap, I realize.
Those who can’t see beyond disabilities
Are mired in self fear; YOU have MY sympathy.”

Out of four thousand entrants, Sam took first place
Impressing us all with his wisdom and grace
Today Sam coaches a college debate team
Having mastered the art of building esteem 

September 8, 2020


I chose this poem because I wrote a poem “Courage” on January 10, 2020, one of the poems in my published book “That Thing Called Life”.  I penned the six kinds of courage in my poem;  physical, social, spiritual, intellectual, moral, and emotional.  I had described and gave examples on each of them.

Carolyn titled her poem “A Different Kind of Courage” that Sam displayed.  I agree with Carolyn that Sam showed a different kind of courage.  He also displayed four kinds of courage: social, spiritual, moral and emotional.  He showed he could face criticisms, rejections, oppositions (social); let go (spiritual); showed his own values (moral) and he discerned and told the truth (emotional).

Carolyn ended her poem “Having mastered the art of building esteem” and I ended my poem “It (Courage) gives us power and inner strength”. 


8/22/21   Celebrating Carolyn's Poetry:
               An Uncontested Poetry
               Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 9/19/2021 9:25:00 PM
Yes, fine example of Carolyn's empathy, Marilene, thank you also for analysis, I must order a copy of your book!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/20/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Jim. I did not know you're an oldie in writing poems... LOL cause you're not old.... I'm a spring chicken in writing poems. Just worked, worked and worked to support my four kids. Just started writing a year after I retired.
Date: 9/11/2021 3:46:00 PM
I will start looking for Carolyn tribute poems today so I can post the list quickly when my "uncontest" closes out by next weekend. Wow, this is a touching example of Carolyn's work. i like how you chose one that really spoke to your heart, Marilene - a poem based on a topic that you too are very interested in. This tale of Carolyn's was awesome!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/11/2021 6:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Yes, people with courage go far in their lives. Some have physical courage, they are the heroes who save lives and intellectual courage, the ones with challenging ideas, taking risk, not afraid to fail and do it again like scientists. Have a great week-end.
Date: 8/28/2021 9:23:00 PM
What a great tribute to Carolyn!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 8/28/2021 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Have a good week-end.
Date: 8/22/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thank you for sharing.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 8/22/2021 2:12:00 PM
My pleasure. Have a great day.
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