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Why Hate

My heart in hand Still-beating like drums Why do you hate me so?

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Viv Wigley

Date: 10/26/2015 1:26:00 AM

A fine little piece, John, well done! Regards, Viv

John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thank you very much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:29:00 PM

awww, a sad one, but i really like it. Congrats for the win.

John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks! This was a new form for me, might continue writing these.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2015 3:34:00 PM

great question! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2015 1:29:00 PM

They obviously don't know you yet! Congrats on your win.

John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thank you!