Why Hate

My heart in hand
Still-beating like drums
Why do you hate me so?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:26 AM
A fine little piece, John, well done! Regards, Viv
Monteblanco Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:29 PM
awww, a sad one, but i really like it. Congrats for the win.
Monteblanco Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Thanks! This was a new form for me, might continue writing these.
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:34 PM
great question! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Monteblanco Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 1:29 PM
They obviously don't know you yet! Congrats on your win.
Monteblanco Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Thank you!
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