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Why Does the Shroud of Crisscrossed Trees Invade

Why does the shroud of crisscrossed trees invade this sunless *kitch..erode my soil of light? The lukewarm milk tastes sour where I have laid. Odd Winter rain does damp my winsome sight. Arise these bones - reform this house of wax. Restart the pilot light and pleasant fumes - of peppermint and thyme, of all one lacks. Excite with citrus blend - let petals bloom. The curtain lace drawn back - I pen this leaf upon bare naked branches and I blow so the wind will restart in fresh belief of kindness - trace of love, these seeds I sow. Arrive anew — a baby born — this year. Mature the steed! Charge on, deprived of fear! 1/2/2019 *shortened from kitchen

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Date: 1/6/2019 2:53:00 PM
Very interesting, Kim. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/6/2019 10:32:00 AM
Lovely, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/4/2019 10:20:00 PM
Fantastic and impressive write, Kim! I see congrats are in order, and we’ll deserved! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 1/4/2019 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim. Love the use of words to form the imagery in your poem. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Date: 1/4/2019 5:11:00 AM
I love this piece. congratulations on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, Ifeanyi!

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