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Why Does it Seem So Easy to You

Why does it seem so easy to you. Use it up. Throw it away. That parts over. The faster you peel the less you feel. I’ll be here. I’ll be here. I won’t leave the dark to itself. You are the only one that left. Committed to a curse. Committed none the less. Heels dig down to the cold. It took a while but I see what it is. It doesn’t disappear. Remember me. Remember what that felt like. Hold on. You will never feel again. That persons gone. They don’t exist. They never did. What role do you want them to play? Who do you want them to be?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/4/2019 10:35:00 PM
Very nice write. I like the word curse as it’s used here.
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:06:00 PM
Thank you for reading
Date: 2/4/2019 12:14:00 PM
Use it up throw it away, this is truth nice poetry.
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:08:00 PM
At times it sure feels like it. Thanks for reading
Date: 2/3/2019 9:28:00 AM
Both fascinating and sad at the same time. Very good! Can’t wait to read more of your thoughts, Atom. Be well, Berteena
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:10:00 PM
Your comment is very appreciated. I really enjoy your poetry.
Date: 1/21/2019 1:25:00 PM
Pointed evocative penning. Welcome to soup Atom! xomo
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thanks. Glad to be here.