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Why Do You Read Me

Why do you read me? Surely not for the artistry of the words They are not flowery Or veiled in mystery They speak in tones of mediocrity For profound they are not Simple, simple words Honey coated, perhaps Is that why you read? Why do you read me? Is it because you want to live An alternate life Where love and passion Are a surging sea Always tumultuous Always pounding Surging Free Is that why your read? Why do you read me? Is it because you want a peek Where all my fantasies hide A voyeur looking in To catch a glimpse of my dreams Dressed in pretty lace Waiting for gentle fingers to untie The satin strings that bind To uncover the beauty within Is that why read? Why do you read me? Is it to read what others have penned In appreciation In commendation To see what the one you love May have left me as precious gift A heart full of longing For the praise given to me Wondering, wondering What he sees in my simple poetry Is that why you read? Why do you read me? Is it because you are a friend And not matter what I may write Be it worthless or divine You will cheer me on Wanting me to know That your love reaches me That your cyber eyes can see Beyond my insatiable desire For self-expression The woman behind the words In need of camaraderie A sweet company A friendly touch of love And kiss of sympathy Is that why you read? I wish, I hope, I dream That you read me Because you find.... A little bit of your life redefined A little bit of your cares expressed A little bit of your heartache shared A little bit of your joy celebrated A little bit of your fear dissipated A little bit of your fantasy explored A little bit of your love elevated A little bit of you And your amazing hue Enmeshed in the lines In my simple rhymes Your and my soul combined Living and breathing In my poetry In the core Of my words Inside of me An encapsulated moment Of eternity.... Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal

Date: 10/29/2013 8:39:00 PM

No-one who writes the above could ever be called mediocre. Flowery, who wants that when they can read the raw passion that fill your writes. Ah yes, The Hurricane surging that sea to tumultuous pounding, surging free spirited. Is that why I read you? Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2013 4:18:00 PM

Richard..........I do thank you, from the bottom of my little orchid heart. This is very very kind of you. Teasing aside.....thank you for being generous in your praise. I needed to read this and know that my poetry is being appreciated. The reasons you gave, are the very reasons why I write....the very ones. Thank you

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/29/2013 6:56:00 PM

i like the idea behind this poem and think you've asked many intriguing questions. i read your poems because i love the way you express yourself and appreciate the way you write. your work is so different from mine, but i still feel a connection to you, across all those miles. it's always a pleasure to read your words - write on, my friend!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2013 4:36:00 PM

Ilene....you are one of the first who got into my favorite poet's file....Yes, we are SO different in the way we write and the content of our work, but I also feel connected to you and do love and appreciate your friendship over the miles. Thank you, sweetie! hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/29/2013 6:51:00 PM

I read you so: I see the world through your eyes, feel the beats of your heart, hear the sounds you hear, think the thoughts in your mind and live your hopes and fears in that way I can understand you, understand another human being and learn from your experiences and knowledge and by doing so I may come to know myself better and most of all I read you because you are my friend and I care! I hope dear Eileen, all these reasons enough to be for an answer!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2013 4:38:00 PM

What a post........WHAT A POST! My dear poet....I am so honored that YOU read my work....I value your thoughts, I value your wisdom, I value your talent, I value your comments, and I value your presence....Thank you...APO TEN Karthia mou!!!! Alethia! Filakia....

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 10/29/2013 1:33:00 PM

I don't read you because of the reasons you list in your second last verse. I'm not that eloquent or deep. I simply read you because I like your poetry. Lose that first verse, girlfriend. It stinks. Hugs. Licia :-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 1:51:00 PM

Thanks, my dear girlfriend! :) Lovely of you to write this encouraging post! HUGS!!!!!!!!!!!

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/29/2013 10:43:00 AM

I read you because your words coat my day with a delicious aura of focus, heart, & reflection. Your words & actions go beyond a sincerity that some need to take a lesson on...both on & offline. Stay true.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 1:53:00 PM

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...........You are too good to me, Drake! Thanks ever so much! I do so appreciate your support....especially when I'm down. You bring sunlight and warmth!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2013 10:29:00 AM

The first stanza should be rewritten as there is no truth in it. The rest is exceptional and filled with artistry. I am compelled to read your words. You are a tsunami of magnificence and your words demand expression. You lack the knowledge of what a tremendous gift you have been given. The first verse dishonors that talent, try to see yourself from the eyes of the One who gave you your gift!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 11:32:00 PM

Thanks, Richard......You are kind to me. My first place in your contest was a highlight in my time here. I will treasure it, especially because it was sponsored by one of my absolute favorite poets of all time...you.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 7:53:00 PM

Despite struggling you have produced some amazing work. I would not put to much stock in where you place in contests, your talent is undeniable.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 2:27:00 PM

It's Ok, RIck...I needed to hear that. Don't worry about being harsh. I can take it from you because I know you are genuine and sincere. "Wounds from a friend can be trusted." So says the Word. Thanks for your generous comment here. I just feel sometimes that my work is going nowhere...I think the fact that I didn't place or did poorly in contests sponsored by people I care about has shaken me up some.... :( I've been struggling here on PS for a bit...I think you've noticed that. We will see how long I can keep going on here.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 11:43:00 AM

I reread my comment and the last part comes accross as harsh which is not my intention. I just want you to see how truly marvelous and gifted you are.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/29/2013 7:20:00 AM

I read you because We share the same love for words ..and your verse always find a way to touch my heart..mind and soul..I read you when you were a stranger and I read you nw that you are my friend.You sweet friend of mine.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 2:28:00 PM

Yes, we do my precious dear sweet friend. God bless you, Charmaine. You are truly beautiful inside and out!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2013 6:23:00 AM

- I read your grief, I read your pleasure .... and you are skilled .... and my friend! - Finally, I give you a hug and wish you a nice day. :)))) - Well done, as always Eileen! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2013 2:29:00 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise. You are the warmth of the sunlight to me today! HUGS returned to you!!! :)