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WHY CANDLES BURN

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because the dark was winning once~ the kind that chews the edges of your breath, the quiet thief that steals the names of stars~ and someone said enough. Lit a wick. Poured thin gold into the hollow of the night. because the world is cold and getting colder, we pile logs until the fire wrestles shadows to the floor. because our hands, empty so long, remember how to hold. because the story never ends with winter. Only with a door left open, a child’s laugh caught like a bell between the falling snow.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 6:53 PM
What a beautiful poem ~ added to my FAVE's
Hind Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Steals my breath- beautiful poetry, Sara.
DiMino Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 12:11 AM
"Lit a wick. Poured thin gold into the hollow of the night." -- Love that! a "child’s laugh caught like a bell between the falling snow." -- Magical imagery. Delightful read. Thank you.
Delegans Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Chews the edges of your breath and wrestles shadows to the floor, wow. I love how these words hit. Very much enjoyed reading this one.
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