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Why Baby Why

Why Baby Why? Every time I see your face, it makes me want to cry. From the moment that we met, until the night we said goodbye. Your smooth dark skin, wavy hair and big brown flashing eyes. When you told me that you loved me, was that one of your first lies? You used to be so kind to me, you made me feel like gold. But you changed your ways and done me wrong, it was like I was bought and sold. You smiled at me and made me weak, was it all a great big game? The way you walked, the way you talked, the way you called my name. What happened to us baby, you never really said. I thought you really cared for me, was it only in my head? Now you left me all alone, whatever will I do? The times we shared, the love we made, how come I never knew? Your with another woman now, I see you most every day. Sometimes I think I see you look, was there something you what to say? Maybe that you did me wrong, and it was all a big mistake. If that is it, I hate to say, I think your much too late. I've learned my lesson when you left, I'll never give my heart again. You hurt me bad and that's no lie, I don't think I will ever mend. Maybe when I'm old and gray, I'll stop my thoughts of you. When they ask me what went wrong, I'll say I never knew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/29/2014 8:31:00 AM
oh, my heart is so heavy... I hope this is not out of a personal experience... Its so so sad, but its an incredible share.
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Margaret Palmer
Date: 7/29/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. It is from personal experience, but it is where it belongs, in the past.
Date: 6/30/2014 11:26:00 AM
fine piece Margaret, although a sad tale but thoughtfully written. welcome to soup and trust you'll enjoy it here, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 6/26/2014 7:27:00 PM
ahhhh, that old familiar pain I myself remember so well. To love rightly, strongly and faithfully only to have it trashed like garbage! Hurts like hell and seems will never end but it always does.. Just takes time. Love the heartfelt write!!! Bravoo!
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Date: 6/26/2014 1:12:00 PM
Man girl, you'll be past all of that before your precious heart even knows it ~ Better for it and ready to tame her world with, your beautiful love ~ Keep brushing through it baby girl! Makes for some good poetry....KLove *
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:34:00 AM
Well, Margaret. I liked your poem very much. It is sad to love someone so strongly and to be hurt so badly. Lessons often come in ways that are painful, and in time you will see them more clearly. As for the construction of the poem, Very well crafted, with great rhymes and a meter that made it enjoyable to read. Well done.... Robert.
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:15:00 PM
I have felt this pain Margaret....It is so sad that a person we love would cause this much pain...welcome to the soup....hugs Tim (7th stanza last word)
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Date: 6/23/2014 5:01:00 PM
Oh am sure there are so many people who can relate to this sad poem. Hope you are over the hurt. Hugs jan xxx
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