Why Are There Stars

When once I pondered whence came the stars
With baited breath and rapid pulse
I let my spirit loose to fly
To the source of my concern.

Pollux was first to welcome my quest
And I shouted, “Why are there stars?”
“A dragon’s sneeze, with blazing glow
Birthed my neighbor and myself.”

“Why are there stars?” of Altair I asked.
 He grudgingly barked a reply.
“Methuselah’s birthday candles
Blew embers strewn heavenward!”

With spirit weary, I ventured on
With many more stars left to source.
“Why are there stars?” was my anthem
Until fully satisfied.

Vega had to hold back a giggle
When faced with my inquiry
“Atalanta now wears Nike’s
Cleats poking holes to the gods.”

With one more cluster to hit I flew
“Why are there stars” my only words
But never in my pondering
Could I picture what was said.

“When your father passed ten years ago
He obsessed of your fear of dark.
He never rests, or takes a break
But hangs nightlights for your peace.”

June 26, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/13/2018 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So beautifully written and interesting, and your last stanza got me. Well done!
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Date: 7/11/2018 8:22:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in the contest, Cindi. A wonderful ending! Sandra
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Date: 7/10/2018 6:17:00 PM
Wow, lovely, Cindi. Congrats.
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement Cindi, well written and a joy to read. :))
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Date: 7/10/2018 4:25:00 AM
Your research led to some interesting stanzas in this poem. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my contest, Cindi.
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/13/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for your comment about being inspired by my contest. Julia, :)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/11/2018 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for the placement. Haven’t been inspired by a contest in a long time; thank you for changing that.
Date: 6/26/2018 10:11:00 PM
Your ending is terrific, making the write!!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/11/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/26/2018 5:50:00 PM
Great concept, Cindi. While you are out there, watch out for those black holes:)Good luck!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/26/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thanks! My money gets sucked in those black holes consistently!
Date: 6/26/2018 2:36:00 PM
I could not have anticipated the ending, and really loved it. I enjoyed reading this. Beverly
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/26/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thank you. I enjoy adding a twist to my poems.
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