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Why Are Thee As Cold As a Winter's Day?

Why are thee as cold as a winter’s day? Thy resounding radiance of thy love Hath fallen like snow in this month of May. This is so uncharacteristic of Thy character that hath always been hot For me. Thy soul seems tempered, tired and Bitter cold, causing thy warm heart to stop And shiver as I grasp your chilly hand. Hath thee found a fresher sun to brighten Thy sultry smile from a frozen frown? Does thou not adore me, please enlighten? My memory, my mind is freezing down. Thy fierce blaze of thy love has embarked, Thy flames put out, thy fire now a spark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2012 8:48:00 PM
MIKE, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:05:00 PM
Renew the spark with a little tenderness..Enjoyed reading this well written Sonnet...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I am honored that you chose one of my works to read today..Thanks ..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2010 11:54:00 PM
Great emotions here Mike.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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