Ronald D Thompson Poet Rhyme

Why Am I So Cold Dad

‘Why am I so cold dad, the cold I cannot cut?'
‘Well it’s snowing really hard son and icy underfoot.’
‘But my brothers and my sisters, it doesn’t bother them,
so why am I so cold and from where does all this stem?’
‘I wouldn’t really worry son but I couldn’t say for sure,
at the moment as far as I’m concerned there’s no specific cure!’
‘But why am I so cold dad it really isn’t fair?
I shouldn’t be this cold dad for I’m a polar bear!’

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Ann Foster October 17, 2019 at 6:47 PM I loved the very last line, brought the world to clarity. Excellent fun. Ann Ronald D Thompson October 18, 2019 at 3:39 AM Thanks Ann. Best wishes...Ron xx

Therese Bacha September 20, 2019 at 6:39 AM Hi Ron, one word touched me, Cure? Fear of dying is my worst enemy. I ask myself? Why did i grow so quickly? Why? i just met you, i pray you already wrote many books for others to learn how to live only in the Moment. Terry Ronald D Thompson September 20, 2019 at 1:56 PM Hi Terry. Fear of dying is also a concern of mine. If you dwell on it too long it can be pretty scary. We cannot change the inevitable and everyone has the same problem to face. Living in the moment and enjoying all that is good seems to help. Best wishes...Ron xx

Mel Gill September 18, 2019 at 8:03 AM Cute...unexpected ending Mel Gill Ronald D Thompson September 18, 2019 at 3:53 PM Thanks Mel. Glad you enjoyed...Ron :)

Elizabeth Kinch September 3, 2019 at 1:50 AM One for my favourites Ronald. I work with children and will love sharing this one with them. Ronald D Thompson September 3, 2019 at 8:46 AM Wow that’s really kind of you Elizabeth. I prefer writing poems for the younger ones so I really appreciate you sharing my work. Best wishes Ron xx

Gershon Wolf September 2, 2019 at 9:06 PM Quite clever, RT, and the ending really floored me. Didn't see it coming at all. Best wishes, Gershon Ronald D Thompson September 3, 2019 at 1:01 PM I'm really working on the twists in my poems so you couldn't have given me a better compliment Gershon. Best wishes...Ron :)