Why

whispering softly
as time slips away
looking for meaning
a reason to stay

lost in a memory
torn by a dream
wishing tomorrow
was all that you deem

finding no answers
within empty thought
taking and giving
and living distraught

never a question
without rationale
no simple expression
while living in hell

written 10.22.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Title matches poem. Short and to the point...congratulations Fran.
Capitano Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Hell's not a great place to be...great poem, though.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Great pondering! Congrats, Francis!
Haight Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Very emotional, stirring deep thoughts, Fran. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra
Selfa Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations Francis! I am so proud of you. You have accomplished a lot. I look forward to seeing even more blessings come to you in the future. - Hans
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Poetry in motion, from beginning to end! Congratulations!
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:23 AM
Emotional, deep and reflective..... Congrats Francis, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Bocsa Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Logic is not enough: feelings or voice of heart must add to reason both hope and will to change what can be changed. Impressive poem good for meditation.
Grasso Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank you, Ovidiu. ...Fran
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