Why

While looking at the vast blue sky, I can imagine myself Sitting against a tree, Watching the sea And hearing the sound of the waves. It still questions my mind... Why am I here all alone? Why can't I enjoy the beautiful scenery in front of me? I feel incomplete from deep within I don't know why I feel this kind of thing But the incompleteness of myself bothers my mind. And in the end.. I still question myself... Why?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/16/2024 5:40:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 11:55:00 AM

zsarrr inna, deep write. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2016 4:29:00 PM

Zsarrr Inna, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **

Herbert Siao

Date: 11/9/2014 11:42:00 AM

I miss my country. Nice poem zsarinna.

Zsarrr Inna
Date: 11/11/2014 2:01:00 AM

thanks!!