Why

Why man is so scared of solitary Hina?
But is ready to devastate with someone!
Oh this dilemmatic notion slaves my mind to think
Please don’t mention its love, it is never prejudiced,
Not self-conceit either, then what is it Hina?
Just have a look around please
Whatever it is, is it beyond dignity of man?
Or is it merely another reflection of principles or values,
Or again is it the fear of death in solitary?
Maybe the dread of stigma,  
i need to be answered , because last night,
When I saw that face in the veil,
Hopeless and wounded, but,
Still unable to cede, per significant other,
Why still diffident, don’t tell me this is love,
i still await to know, hope  it’s not a fallacy
Then why their conscious doesn’t agree
It is not enough to convince me hina,
This reality is so bitter to swallow,
I will just wallow in my own vistas,
Yes! I’m not destined for this kind of absurdity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/30/2014 12:51:00 AM
Or again is it the fear of death in solitary? Maybe the dread of stigma, Nice Hina you are doing well, specialy I like the scheme ,pattern ,and flow .Upto my savvy this Why named poem deserve 7 out of 7 Points.
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/30/2014 8:52:00 AM
:-)) thankyousomuch !!!
Date: 8/29/2014 1:54:00 PM
Yes, I comprehended what you meant Hina. That is why i said you will find what is true and evidently, you have. Verlena
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/29/2014 3:50:00 PM
YEA got it :-) ultimate reality :-/ ...tnx Verlana ...
Date: 8/29/2014 10:47:00 AM
Hina is you. What is absurd about that? Excellent write Hina... You will find what is true. Verlena
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/29/2014 11:07:00 AM
yes ..... i answered myself then .that im not meant to go through this kind of phase of life which i rightly called as absurdity :-))) that s wat i meant ..hop u got it :-)) thanks alot for appreciating
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