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Why

WHY


Why? 
Why, oh my soul, you perpetually 
Are yearning to: 
See the unseen 
Hear the unheard 
Feel the unfelt 
Touch the untouchable
Attain the unattainable 
Believe the unbelievable 
Think the unthinkable 
Conceive the inconceivable 
Know the unknowable 
Appreciate the unappreciable 
Express the inexpressible 
When, no heart of Man, ever able will be 
To understand the purity of your language,
Its honesty and grandeur
Unless 
Totally it is submerged
To  
Poetry’s divine depths? 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
      25 AUGUST 2013

(This is inspired by Eileen’s Ghali poem “Behind the Words” and was initially intended as a comment)

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2013

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Karl Marszalowicz Date: 10/14/2013 2:35:00 AM you talk of a sixth sense here. a wide open topic. pretty good Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/13/2013 1:43:00 AM Thank you, Karl, for your visit and comment! Writing poetry is somehow a sixth sense, isn't it?

Sean Claudine Date: 10/12/2013 7:20:00 PM beautiful, "When, no heart of Man, ever able will be To understand the purity of your language" yes!! some of us burn, from within seeths a consuming flame, our souls so powerful that our bodies could not fully repress it, we live we love and always in pensive thought. hahahahaha inspiring and resonating Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/13/2013 12:49:00 AM Thank you, Sean, for taking the time to visit and to express your valuable thoughts!

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu Date: 9/12/2013 11:38:00 PM Awesome write. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/13/2013 2:20:00 AM Thank you, Alozor, for your kind comment!

Donna Jones Date: 8/25/2013 9:24:00 PM Wow..divine depths......that's my girl.....my daughter Chosen by my soul.....great poem Demetrios.... PS Eileen let's me call her daughter.....:-) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 8/26/2013 3:27:00 AM MD....I do love you so! Demetrios...thank you for this kind compliment! :) Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/26/2013 3:14:00 AM Rightfully so! I might call her my daughter as well for she is so charming and witty! Thank you!

Shanity Rain Date: 8/25/2013 4:14:00 PM I love this .. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 4:53:00 PM I love that you love it! Thank you!

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/25/2013 10:56:00 AM Welcome back, I loved your poem ( Why )? I often ask myself that question. I am glad that you decided to write again. Many blessings to you always....... Lucy Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 11:17:00 AM Thank you Lucy, unfortunately for me cannot stay for long this time, later on I hope I will do when certain issues are resolved here in Greece.

Karen Anglesey Date: 8/25/2013 9:46:00 AM A very deep and thoughtful thing to write The explanation of the inspiration was profoundly moving. Such eloquent comments to a fellow poet. I have used comments from other poets as inspiration as well. This is stunning :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 11:19:00 AM Dearest Karen how nice of you to visit and how gracious your comment is! Thank you!

Toquyen Harrell Date: 8/25/2013 8:02:00 AM Enjoyed, Demetrios! And we will - in time. Love ya, Toquyen Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 8:54:00 AM Thank you my friend. May the Lord bless you!

Jack Ellison Date: 8/25/2013 5:58:00 AM And Demetrios makes a triumphant return to the Soup! Welcome back my good friend! ?a??µ??a Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 7:05:00 AM My dearest friend and fellow Canadian, thank you for your welcoming I have missed the club but conditions in Greece do not allow me to come back full time. So nice to see you! Thank you for your comment!

Russell Sivey Date: 8/25/2013 5:47:00 AM This has to be the most beautiful comment I've ever read my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! You have presented a brilliant piece Demetrios, such a tremendous poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 7:05:00 AM Dear Russell, thank you so much! I have enjoyed your poem this morning!

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/25/2013 12:42:00 AM Demetri....then exo logia.....katapliktikos!!!!!!!!! Efkharisto....What a lovely, beautiful poem...as with all your work, you have touched me. :) So glad to have you back, my dear poet...Hope you keep writing... Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2013 2:33:00 AM Thank you for inspiring me to write this piece of poetry.