whut could edvard say
.
i meant
me
anywho
there were
i
collect'n onions
and sum orchidz
well
at thuh edge uv
thuh there
creek
'twere eve
play'n in thuh
chilly creek
spring
mhm
put yer glassez on
you me (i mean edvard)
read
write
right
he say
did
'play'n' mhm
ouch
whut
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