Jeanne Mcgee Poet Roundel

Whose Heart Beats Entranced

"Only from the Heart you can touch the sky"  Rumi
   
      Whose heart beats entranced, as a thrumming sound
    And seeks the honey of a silken kiss
  In iridescent perfection he’s crowned
Whose heart beats entranced
  Petals tremble cocooned in all their bliss
    The nectar of love keeps us all spellbound
  He flies to the sky to clouds' white abyss
As he skips to his sweethearts found around 
  His sweet flowers a lovers’ reminisce
     Hummingbird, the whole world is your playground
        Whose heart beats entranced

 



written 10-14-2019 copyrighted
Writing Challenge, October, 2019 -Bird- 

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper October 25, 2019 at 6:33 PM Jeanne, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve

Joseph May October 22, 2019 at 7:07 PM Congrats on your win Jeanne..

Constance La France October 22, 2019 at 11:47 AM Jeanne congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this interesting poem!

Jan Allison October 21, 2019 at 5:19 AM I'd love to see a hummingbird for real Jeanne, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2019 at 1:03 PM - Congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf October 16, 2019 at 11:59 AM Such a lovely roundel, Jeanne, so delightfully displayed on the page! Just beautiful. Warmest wishes, Gershon Jeanne Mcgee October 17, 2019 at 10:32 AM I hope it looks like a little bird...I hope it passes muster in the contest...the example and the rules given on PS were different...not sure if where the refrain was suppose to go.