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Whose Heart Beats Entranced

"Only from the Heart you can touch the sky" Rumi Whose heart beats entranced, as a thrumming sound And seeks the honey of a silken kiss In iridescent perfection he’s crowned Whose heart beats entranced Petals tremble cocooned in all their bliss The nectar of love keeps us all spellbound He flies to the sky to clouds' white abyss As he skips to his sweethearts found around His sweet flowers a lovers’ reminisce Hummingbird, the whole world is your playground Whose heart beats entranced written 10-14-2019 copyrighted Writing Challenge, October, 2019 -Bird- Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2019 6:33:00 PM

Jeanne, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 10/22/2019 7:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jeanne..

Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2019 11:47:00 AM

Jeanne congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this interesting poem!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 5:19:00 AM

I'd love to see a hummingbird for real Jeanne, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2019 1:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/16/2019 11:59:00 AM

Such a lovely roundel, Jeanne, so delightfully displayed on the page! Just beautiful. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/17/2019 10:32:00 AM

I hope it looks like a little bird...I hope it passes muster in the contest...the example and the rules given on PS were different...not sure if where the refrain was suppose to go.