Who's the Boss

Bride-to-be's running the show.
She's been down this road before.
Poor groom is a first timer.
Does not have a clue!

She says jump,he says"how high?"
Mustn't tick her off,he knows.
Can't wait for the wedding night.
Then he'll be in charge!


By Deb Wilson
for "Wedding Rehearsal"contest
sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 18, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Ha ha ha. Humorous indeed. Congrats on your high mark in this contest. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 10:26 PM
well, I hope he finally gets to be in charge! This was fun to read, Deb. Congrats on your win in the contest!
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:29 PM
giggle..yeah right ;) ;) VERY creative take on the topic! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Deb! Great entry. Congratulations onyour poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 1:58 PM
LOL The groom only "thinks" he'll be in charge on the wedding night. Very witty, Deb. Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Deb. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Congratlations on the fifth place win in my contest, deb
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May 1, 2011 at 12:29 PM
LOL great take on the contest Deb... broughts some smiles wih this one....luv Michael
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