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Who's the Boss

Bride-to-be's running the show. She's been down this road before. Poor groom is a first timer. Does not have a clue! She says jump,he says"how high?" Mustn't tick her off,he knows. Can't wait for the wedding night. Then he'll be in charge! By Deb Wilson for "Wedding Rehearsal"contest sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 1:12:00 PM
Ha ha ha. Humorous indeed. Congrats on your high mark in this contest. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/17/2011 10:26:00 PM
well, I hope he finally gets to be in charge! This was fun to read, Deb. Congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:29:00 PM
giggle..yeah right ;) ;) VERY creative take on the topic! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:22:00 PM
Deb! Great entry. Congratulations onyour poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 1:58:00 PM
LOL The groom only "thinks" he'll be in charge on the wedding night. Very witty, Deb. Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratlations on the fifth place win in my contest, deb
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Date: 5/1/2011 12:29:00 PM
LOL great take on the contest Deb... broughts some smiles wih this one....luv Michael
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