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"Who's on First" was Abbott and Costello's most famous comedy routine.

"Who's on First?" was Abbott and Costello's most famous comedy routine.

Coaching Little League was Dad’s greatest joy My brother Artie always got a hit Proud Pop would smile and say, “That’s my boy!” I would cheer too, but then my brow would knit It seemed unfair that I could not partake In a sport that consumed much of Dad’s time “Put me in, coach, a home run I can make!” But I felt left out of the national pastime Times had changed when Artie’s daughters were raised Annette could pitch and Diane played left field Their success made Artie feeling amazed For their sports talent had another yield College scholarships quickly came their way It wasn’t their school grades that drew acclaim Honors came for the way they’d learned to play Girls finally took their place in the game Soon our whole clan was playing together At family parties and on holidays This summer sport’s played through winter weather In photos you’ll find me smiling at first base *February 25, 2017

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Date: 3/6/2017 2:01:00 PM
Fun for the whole famdamly. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/3/2017 3:55:00 AM
Great story Carolyn and wonderful memories. It's great how things that were once denied a "lady" are now open for females to not only attend but partake in. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/26/2017 11:42:00 AM
You could of played for my team any day...great poem of family coming together.
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Date: 2/25/2017 11:58:00 PM
Pure poetry that bespeaks of equality, Carolyn. Top notch honesty. I daughter played high school basketball. I loved that movie "A League of Their Own," and the theme song, "This Used to be My Playground," by Madonna. Wonderful poem, dear. Get a base hit for me next time willya. Love and hugs to you.
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Date: 2/25/2017 8:39:00 PM
Great poem, Carolyn, I too have a grandson that has gotten his scholarship through baseball.. and a son that taught him everything he knows... Love both Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:42:00 PM
CArolyn, you are gonna win for sure with THIS one. Probably about the funnest one I have read yet in this contest. Your love for the game was shining in it. DANG. I just saw that the contest had not gotten locked and closed out after all. WHAT the heck is going on???
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:35:00 PM
Fabulous write, Mrs Carolyn. Are you a lefty? Fun stuff:)
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:23:00 PM
hey carolyn - at least you finally got to play! too bad you didn't when you were a girl. your poem is wonderful...
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:57:00 PM
I remember that script so vividly Carolyn and love your descriptive poem - the thought of the family bonding together over this game:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:38:00 PM
Now I know who's on first.. It's always good to catch a smile...lovely write Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:33:00 PM
Things have changed so much for women over the years. In 1969 I wanted to be hired as a pilot, but there were no female pilots, so I settled for being a stewardess. It turned out to be the best outcome because I was always very active and would've gone crazy in the cockpit sitting for hours. I love how you express your love for the game and that women are now accepted in most sports and jobs. A wonderful poem Carolyn! : ) 7
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