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WHO'S IN CHARGE? Backseat drama has crossed the line? Do not cave! YOU are THE mama! They don't behave? Just one more whine you must be resigned to drive them home, to bed/pajamas! Then, enjoy some time to have the wine you crave! ________________________________________________ Contest Sponsored by Silent One "Grook" 3/5/13

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Date: 2/18/2016 8:00:00 PM
Said like a true Mama!! mama mia!! Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I've wonder this myself sometimes :) Excellent!
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:53:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:58:00 PM
This grook has a lot of personality too it, and was something different. Your whine/win play on words, I thought, was original. Thanks for your participation!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/17/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim. This was a fun challenge and contest !!! :)
Date: 4/13/2013 6:47:00 AM
Oh yeah!!! Congratulations Carrie...Donna
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Date: 4/11/2013 10:48:00 AM
I like your grook Carrie, sounds like my 2 young ones.. a nice little win...PD
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Date: 4/8/2013 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Carrie, nice going xx
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Date: 3/8/2013 12:28:00 PM
I have been there with the backseat issues..It is no fun..Great way to express the idea..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2013 2:49:00 PM
Good one, Carrie. Love your play on words. My husband likes to say (when someone is whining) "Would you like a little cheese with that w(h)ine?"
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Date: 3/6/2013 4:08:00 PM
You ARE THE MAMA for sure!...And have a glass of wine then another and another, etc.... Also, thanks so much for your comments on my Cottage poem, dear friend...Coming from you it means the world..I know what your dear daughter must be going through, and you as well watching her go through it...I don't know how much help I could be, but if there's anything she needs, I am here for her...God bless you both - Tim
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Date: 3/6/2013 10:04:00 AM
lol, had a chuckle here, Carrie - will have to check out this fun form
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