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Who's Gonna' Hold Their Hand

Who’s gonna' cook the breakfast, after I’m gone. Who’s gonna' wash the dishes, or mow the lawn. Who’s gonna' make the bed, or do the laundry instead, of watching TV. Oh, I can just see. They’ll all live in filth and poverty, after I’m gone. As I am mopping up the floor, I ask you once more. Who’s gonna cook their meals, after I’m gone. Who’s gonna' be around, for them to lean on. Who’s gonna' make the tea, or fetch their glasses so they can see, flush the toilet after they pee, after I’m gone.

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Date: 12/17/2023 12:37:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. The cleaning service they'll hire, little doubt. Just think, you've done it all for free for years. Here's to 'JB Cleaning' from this moment on. Make sure to charge what you're worth to. Either you'll make a good buck, or 'they' will learn how to do all these chores.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/18/2023 6:55:00 PM
I could become a millionaire.
Date: 12/16/2023 4:37:00 AM
lol your honesty & thoughts are most refreshing here, we all think that way but most often don't express it. I'm sure they will miss the man who was their shadowed love. Hopefully they will say a prayer for you, as you are missed. Maybe they will flush, if not then you can flush from your celestial room and scare the pants off them lol, have a blessed day dear Jerry.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/18/2023 6:53:00 PM
It was my wife who said this to me. I embellished it a bit. Let's call it poetic license.
Date: 12/15/2023 3:07:00 PM
I found your poem humorous as you lament "Who's gonna.... after I'm gone." Who knows. Maybe someone will rise to the challenge. Nevertheless, after you're gone, not your problem, right?
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/15/2023 6:01:00 PM
You are so right. After I'm gone, who cares.
Date: 12/15/2023 1:00:00 PM
Who are they Jerry!?!? Haha…..Don't worry you'll be gone so not your problem Ha! Enjoyed….Debx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/15/2023 6:03:00 PM
According to my wife, they would be me. But we all know who I mean.
Date: 12/15/2023 12:05:00 PM
And that is why they have to learn themselves.. unless they are not able to do these things.. Is this inspired by real life?
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/15/2023 6:07:00 PM
Yeah, my wife was complaining about something I said I would do but didn't. She said, "I swear if I wasn't here, you'd starve to death." I just added the rest for effect.

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