Who's Fault Is It

God speaks as conscience; childlike innocence. When we disobey, soul’s blue skies turn grey.
The ever changing moods of a soul that longs to be free can be varied and vast like an ocean's fluctuate artistry So often we lose the hearing of the young replacing it with stubborn ears of old that refuse to believe Having stared at grey skies for a lifetime we no longer sheen the Faith of our forefathers ; We never turn the finger nor blame the culprit for the turning of events we turn a blind eye to our past actions the ones that have led us astray; God speaks as conscience but sometimes we interpret His voice any which way we please when soul's blue skies turn grey, whos fault is it anyway ! Betrayed by our hand, life’s barren and bland, until we awake; dark desires forsake. Engulfed in the carnage desires of flesh and wanton beat we lose sight of the glorious pregnant gardens of our youth Slighting beauty we abuse of the God given gift of choice we opt for a barren and bland life of repetitive fractal sins; Betrayed by our own hand we have no recourse until we awaken to the calling of an Arching blessing; Then we move into a colored world full of bright nuances, where everyone can see that we have finally understood the true meaning of being fully awakened by the Spirit. Amen !

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Date: 4/27/2022 8:59:00 AM
Deeply moving... loads of imagery. Well done. Ann
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Date: 4/24/2022 1:33:00 AM
a FAVE dear pastor Vienna, this is so, so good. Your poem is biblically ON TARGET; our choices turn blue skies to grey! I ove the ending, too, for there is the Call of the Spirit to His kind of "Holiness" and/or obedience as perfected in Jesus of Nazareth. thXs Vie, sand halom, shalom!
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Date: 4/24/2022 2:28:00 AM
Thank you for honoring my poem as Fav Anil, you are most appreciated, from this grateful heart, have a blessed day :)
Date: 4/23/2022 10:43:00 PM
Moral values are based on what God has decreed. But most turn them into their own personal views. They have their personal menu.
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Date: 4/24/2022 2:28:00 AM
I agree Victor there are many that do. But only God holds the bare truth, :)
Date: 4/23/2022 4:01:00 PM
A deep poem . Thought provoking. Well done! I hope youbhave a good evening :)
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Date: 4/23/2022 6:06:00 PM
Glad to hear from you dear Heidi, hope your keeping well, thanks for you kind visit, stay well
Date: 4/23/2022 3:58:00 PM
Divine words of enlightenment--much depth to your thoughts, Vienna. A blissful write beaming awakening.
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Date: 4/23/2022 5:59:00 PM
Thank you dear Vijay, for reading and commenting, :)
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