Wholehearted

I am forever 
indebted to your spirit 
alive in my soul

devotionprayersenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

October 29, 2025 at 11:49 AM

So sweet

Ghairo Daniels

May 24, 2025 at 3:08 AM

And so am I, P.M. ThkU for beautiful forever ness lines. x.

Paul Marc

May 30, 2025 at 6:44 PM

Thank you Ghairo ~

Beata Agustin

June 4, 2024 at 12:04 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Paul Marc

June 12, 2024 at 1:33 PM

Thanks Beata!

Bill Baker

October 17, 2023 at 1:19 PM

Powerful and deep poetry for only 3 lines, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, P.M. A poet friend in Texas, Bill ps I'm following your poetry now!

Paul Marc

October 18, 2023 at 4:11 AM

Thank you Bill. You are very kind.

Linda Alice Fowler

August 2, 2023 at 4:58 PM

This poem delights my senses - terrific! :)

Paul Marc

September 18, 2023 at 9:43 AM

Thanks Linda :)

Sotto Poet

July 28, 2023 at 6:48 AM

Exquisite. An embrace of the ethereal spirit, invigorating the very essence of one's being. Allow me to extend my heartfelt felicitations on your win P. M. and thanks for your comment on my page

Paul Marc

September 18, 2023 at 9:40 AM

You are very kind. Thank you so much!