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Whole New Attitooed

There once was a fair swanky maiden Who each week at Weight Watchers weighed in Her whole new attitude On her arm fresh tattooed Heaped desserts no more for her laden AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 16, 2018

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/18/2018 12:20:00 AM

Good one, Line! Janice

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/17/2018 10:12:00 AM

Tats are forever, I hate ever saying never, good one Line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2018 11:27:00 AM

My husband said never and he ended up getting a few for radiation treatment... never say never.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/16/2018 11:42:00 PM

of body, concerned swanky maiden /// nice limerick

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:44:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mahtab.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/16/2018 11:06:00 PM

I was in a limerick-creating mood today, and then I read this and said "Line was too!" I used to weigh in every week at Weight Watchers. This poem is a fun reminder of that.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:37:00 PM

So funny that we would both be in a limerick writing mood, Caren.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/16/2018 6:58:00 PM

Sometimes it's good to have a little excess weight in case you get sick and lose it. Great Limerick, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:03:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph. Plump is beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2018 5:41:00 PM

If one had it tattooed , that would certainly discourage backsliding! I am so happy to have found the secret and not have to pay weight watchers for it!! Just eat LOTS of plant based foods!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 6:11:00 PM

That makes you a green maiden, Andrea. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment.