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2/5/2025 for Golden Age of Music Poetry Contest sponsored by Oliver Mckiethan 

Whole Lotta Love

I was a late arrival
born in nineteen fifty-eight,
during the folk revival.
As a kid, music was survival.
Records then sounded great
on a platter or a plate,
like Peter, Paul, and Mary,
and Puff on a seventy-eight.

Later, having no place to go
and no one to meet,
Mr. Tambourine man would show
a wonder I did not know.
In my consciousness, he took a seat, 
I listened o'er and o'er.
I put it on repeat - 
something worth living for.
Chase dreams, he would entreat.

How I remember, in the park,
I heard my first live electric guitar.
At the sound of that spark,
something in me, no longer dark,
like fusion in a star,
with electricity instilled, 
from where I was, it took me far.
Everything inside me thrilled.

That was only just the start. 
There are too many bands to name, 
who created musical art
to expand the mind and heart, 
no two of them the same,
like the Airplane and Grateful Dead,
peace and love, they would proclaim, 
and those sentiments would spread.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 4:12 AM
Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Thanks for the visit Sara!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Dave. You say you came along a little late but you showed that you appreciate that great music in your wonderful poem
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 5:14 PM
Thanks Oliver. Yep, I was more of a child of the seventies, but my favorite music was from the 60s, probably - but I also like 50s and 70s music. Fun to write about it.
Radice Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 3:21 AM
Music is the nearest thing we humans have to a Time Machine. Loved the references. Cheers - Gary
Crandall Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 10:32 AM
Thanks Gary. I see you're from the UK. I still like that old music and, especially in the folk-rock vein, some of my favorite bands come from out your way: Pentangle, Fairport Convention, Steeleye Span.
Singh Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Folk music be it ours or others always beautiful.to me.Nice poem.
Crandall Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 10:31 AM
Thanks. I used to live by a library that had a huge record collection, including folk music from all over the world. It was great - even if I didn't understand the words, though I'm sure that would make it even better.
Greenhough Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Older songs seem to be coming back. Perhaps we'll see another revival. I like the memories in your poem.
Crandall Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:33 PM
Thanks Hilda. I think no matter what, people will always prefer the songs that came out when they were about 16 years old.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Nice one, David! I was born in 1960.
Crandall Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Thanks Kim - right about the same time! I remember my aunt gave me Puff the Magic Dragon to me for my birthday or for Christmas when it was a new song. I think I actually discovered a lot of the 60s music in the 70s, always listening to the stuff that people 5 or 10 years older liked.
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