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Who Will

WHO WILL? With frozen tears, she stands alone, Not knowing what to do, With nobody to call her own, Who will her heart subdue? Listen to her heart thudding loud, She faces the unknown, When darkness does her face enshroud, Who will hearken her groan? With weeping, she worries and frets, Emotions rule her mind, Sometimes, her purpose she forgets, Who will help her unwind? 11.23.2020 (8.6.8.6 syllables)

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Date: 12/12/2020 10:40:00 AM
Great write but a positive ending is always better. God will help if she has faith. Does such positive ending work in reality is the question i am asking myself... Not sure maybe you are right.
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Date: 11/23/2020 7:14:00 AM
I will help her.... always keep the faith..
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Date: 11/23/2020 5:32:00 AM
Love this so much. It's a fave! God bless you
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