Who She Is

- Who She is. -
She is the statue of liberty
The lady of the harbour 
A beacon and a pillar of light
She is burnt at the stake
She is woken by a kiss
Calling from afar
She says " I will fight naked on a horse if you would follow me"
She takes the kids to school with kids in hand her face is full
Even blindfolded she always knows the truth
Her laugh is like a split pomegranite
Often she admonishes me
I just go along stupidly
She taught us how to weave
She taught us how to believe
She shades us like the cedars of Lebanon
Her virtues just goes on and on
We are her children and her name is Freedom
Her heart is like a river, mysterious and deep
The last thought to leave my mind before I go to sleep
She is the matriarch
That takes us to the water
Where we can fill our trunks and we can splash our thanks
We blindly follow her and when we look again she is the vanguard in the rear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:22 AM
A great poem to read. I was thinking it was an actual person like a mom or wife but I believe it is metaphorical now! Nicely done.
Mziyako Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 3:49 AM
I guess she is the lady of inspiration
Breedt Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 3:22 PM
We have to defend her too. Yes indeed Lwazi
Austin Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 12:01 PM
A fine tribute to a truth. Love, daver
Breedt Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Thank you Daver.
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November 17, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Wow, this is formidable poetry. Richly textured inspiration, respect! 7+
Breedt Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Hi Paloma, I am deeply jonoured by a visit from PS no1 poet. Thank you for your input and Be sure I am still your ardent follower
B. Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Wow this is fantastic :)
Breedt Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Carol
Godwin Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Jannie - I am finally here to tell you how thrilled I am to have a poem dedicated to me; you are beyond sweet and considerate! A freedom poem no less, how appropriate considering it has always been topmost on my intangible want list. I think you did a most poetic job, there are some great imagery lines and I truly enjoyed your write. It bums me out that no other is here, I'll never understand that ... CayCay
Breedt Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Hi Cay Cay. No worries they will come around eventually. You are such an inspiration .
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