Who Says Romance Is Dead

Who says romance is dead?

What is this romance? Did it die as they often said?
No, I think not, I don’t think romance is dead.

He holds the car door open for me, but only to let me out.
He puts the keys in the lock for me, so none hears him shout.

He talks to me of all his wishes, but that's so he doesn’t have time for kisses.
He soothes my brow when I am stressed, but that’s so he can get a rest.

My tea he makes just how I like it, no milk or sugar and hot.
He says he does it that way; otherwise, I would like it - not.

He holds my hand to stop me wandering far far away,
Then he lets go as we cross the lanes on the busy dual carriage way. 

He introduces me as “The Missis”
This love of mine so full of kisses,

He kisses everyone he sees, to show that he is faithful
He doesn’t need to kiss me, unless he wants to be playful.

Romance isn’t dead, I can be assured
In his love for me he will not be deterred.

He loves me now still quite a lot,
But that may be because of the money I’ve got.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/27/2014 2:29:00 AM
Mandy... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/25/2014 2:35:00 PM
I loved the slow lead up to the last line, which caught me by surprise and made me laugh.
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Mark, life is like that sometimes it leads you along and then bites you in the bum, thanks for the comment I appreciate it xx
Date: 4/25/2014 8:25:00 AM
"money is the fruit of all evil... and so romance, too!! ".. haha... this is superb,Mandy Tams!!! .. I so love the message in every lines...romance isn't really dead, You can buy it like it's always ON SALE!!! ...clever girl!!! :O)) I'm gonna fave you and this!! ^_^
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/25/2014 10:20:00 AM
Hi thank you so much what a lovely compliment xx
Date: 4/21/2014 10:54:00 AM
Not to worry Muhamma it was written tongue in cheek xx
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:41:00 AM
Last lines sad parts.
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Date: 11/10/2012 10:50:00 AM
Dear Mandy, I think of the past with this Superb Pen "The Carriage Way" I don't think he Loves YOU "because of the money You've got. I LOVED Lenore and Yes Her parents had alot of Money After she died I only saw her family on Thanksgiving, and Christmas (I know YOU do not Celebrate with gifts) I am going to write a POEM for YOU as a Christmas Present from me as I do Celebrate the True meaning of Christmas The Magi's brought Gifts LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege... Harry Soup mail
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:57:00 AM
oh your purse is full, i know now why i love your poetry... just kidding!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:54:00 AM
You're going to love my Valentine's day poems.
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