Who Said Can'T -In Constanza

Who Said Can't- Constanza

Who said can’t breathe air of freedom?
That’s what you make your self-belief.
Your portion from life you won’t thief.

Breath to life bears many kingdoms:
For you and your treasures’ relief;
Except should your choosing are grief’s.

Life and death are ways to end-doom.
Should you want comfort midst brief,
And both to court and live you chief.

Wedlock is beyond bride and groom.
Expand life in pairs: man and beef…
Lo, your turn over a new leaf.

Warrants meek and mild on seldom.
Too humble soul, the disbelief;
But frankly, bequeaths no mischief.

Who said can’t breathe air of freedom?
Breath to life bears many kingdoms:
Life and death are ways to end-doom.
Wedlock is beyond bride and groom.
Warrants meek and mild on seldom.

A.O,5/01/2014

For: Craig Cornish's "Andrea's Inspiration, Connie's Form, Constanza" Contest.
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Date: 4/9/2014 12:21:00 PM
ABDULHAFEEZ, , Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2014 3:52:00 PM
interesting form and lovely pen OA Shadow x smile hug
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:24:00 AM
Always smiling Shadow. Thanks and hug to you too.
Date: 1/5/2014 9:49:00 PM
Now this i can understand and relate two i've been married twice, once to a man who was mean as all get out, i could only save my life and gain freedom by divorce, i meant my second husband and he lets me be me. He is my freedom song with every breath he takes. great write much better. cheri
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:23:00 AM
Lucky you dear Cherl. I'm happy to hear this revelation. Thanks for blessing my pens with uplifting remarks.
Date: 1/5/2014 7:19:00 PM
Good to see you trying this form, my friend. Good luck in the contest and I hope you have a happy new year.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thanks lady Andrea. Returns the luck to you too in the contest (that is if you try).
Date: 1/5/2014 10:51:00 AM
you did well with this form AO...I am still struggling with mine...best wishes for the New Year...
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:18:00 AM
Wish you the best on yours, JM. Thanks on your visitation.
Date: 1/5/2014 10:34:00 AM
You have done a great job with this poem, A breath air of freedom. Thanks for sharing this and for your commevt on my poem..... Lucilla
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:17:00 AM
Your words uplift, madam Lucilla. Thank you.
Date: 1/5/2014 9:21:00 AM
- Very well written poem, A.O. - I wish you good luck in the contest - hope you will get on the winning list!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/23/2014 6:16:00 AM
Thank you lady Anne for your lovely visit and nice wish.
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