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Who Said

WHo said my life had to be carved and painted and placed on display for all to see?
That my actions would create a tornado and cyclone of disaster behind me
That I had to mimic my ancestors course of history
Instead of making my own masterpiece

Who said that I would be doomed to trials and tribulations placed before me
But I rose again and again standing  tall and strong like an oak tree
Didn't bother me when others turned me down bowing their heads in shame
Yet I continued like the strong person I was meant to be

Who said that everyone's blueprint was stamped loser or winner or rich or poor
Only God can judge us once we've entered that door
I placed my name card under determined strong minded and willing to try
Knowing one day we will laugh smile frown and cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 11:11:00 AM
Terrific poem Cecilia, thank you for sharing>>James
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:28:00 AM
I love this poem. There aer so many wonderful insights shared here. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/17/2009 4:12:00 PM
Very insightful,strong emotions from the heart ,the best place to write.Enjoyed.......Jim
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:28:00 PM
Bravo!-AA
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