Who Said

WHo said my life had to be carved and painted and placed on display for all to see?
That my actions would create a tornado and cyclone of disaster behind me
That I had to mimic my ancestors course of history
Instead of making my own masterpiece

Who said that I would be doomed to trials and tribulations placed before me
But I rose again and again standing  tall and strong like an oak tree
Didn't bother me when others turned me down bowing their heads in shame
Yet I continued like the strong person I was meant to be

Who said that everyone's blueprint was stamped loser or winner or rich or poor
Only God can judge us once we've entered that door
I placed my name card under determined strong minded and willing to try
Knowing one day we will laugh smile frown and cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Terrific poem Cecilia, thank you for sharing>>James
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April 19, 2009 at 6:28 AM
I love this poem. There aer so many wonderful insights shared here. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
Skinner Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Very insightful,strong emotions from the heart ,the best place to write.Enjoyed.......Jim
Hudson Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Bravo!-AA
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