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Who Knew

Years ago, when men wore hats And women heels instead of flats, Who knew unsaturated fats Were somehow kind of healthy? When TV’s were in black and white And folks dressed up before a flight, Who knew that every deep-fried bite Would need us to be stealthy? When ice cream cones cost 15 cents And pronouns didn’t cause offense, Who knew with rules some could dispense And wind up smug and wealthy?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/23/2023 7:30:00 PM
Indeed, who knew. Fun clever write ilene.
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Date: 2/18/2023 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful poem... Keep doing well.
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Date: 2/14/2023 3:56:00 PM
Love this, Ilene. Some of those politicians and businessmen should check out your last two lines… they’d realise they’ve been sussed! Terry
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:15:00 PM
A mastepiece, Ilene. I especially love the "pronouns" line! Janice
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Date: 2/11/2023 12:04:00 AM
Very lovely and thought provoking, Ilene:)
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Date: 2/10/2023 11:58:00 PM
Who knew...love it from start to finish Ilene...a catchy little number!! Hehe which rhymes and flows beautifully....Debx
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Date: 2/10/2023 8:04:00 PM
Yes indeed! Lovr the rhyme scheme in this delightful poem. / Maurice
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Date: 2/10/2023 6:04:00 PM
Indeed, very wise words here, Ilene. Love this.
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Date: 2/10/2023 2:24:00 PM
I like the BITE in this one, Ilene! ~ Wearer of the (black) hat. lol. Good Shabbos!
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Date: 2/10/2023 2:19:00 PM
Well, Ilene, I was never a "hat" person, but I do sometimes prefer black and white TV over the modern profferings. I love this piece, and agree with Wendy's comments.
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Date: 2/10/2023 1:48:00 PM
Beautifully constructed Ilene, and so very true. I liked wearing heels and dressing up... now that all that fried food has told its toll, I hate dressing up and wearing heels ! Loved your poem, very clever, and right on the point.
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