Notes About The Poem

Kat en muis:

- Who Killed the Mouse -

Much loved
nose rubbed

Bad plan
began ...

Fat mice
no price

Much fun
in sun

The cat
did that!







   27.10.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
   https://www.howmanysyllables.com
   19 words
   20 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Love the poem, hate the subject, Anne-Lise. Can't stand mice. But that's just me. A fine job on the footles. Love always
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:18 AM
- Tiny mouse ... is so cute ...:) - Mickey Mouse is a good friend of my childhood :))) - Freddie, thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
P  Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Perfect footle for the graphic, enjoyable, not for the wee mouse of course.
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 7:30 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Paloma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Congrats on your placing in the contest..It is good to see wonderful work in the line up..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 11:56 AM
- Thanks Sara, for visits and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:16 PM
I see congrats are in order! :) I really needed to read something sweet and light. Your lovely poem was a ray of sunshine. Hugs, dear one.
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 4:38 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:32 AM
And congratulations!!
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 12:35 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Ah, you had fun with this footle series, Sunshine! In a dog's world, the cat is always the culprit. LOL Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 12:34 PM
- Yes, that's right ....always :)))
Bradfield Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations...brought a chuckle..Larry
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:36 AM
- Larry, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Congrats to you, Ann-lise!!
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:36 AM
- Andrea, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Truly enjoyed these delightful footles Anne-Lise:) I don't mind mice as long as they don't go running round the house! I used to keep some white dancing mice as pets, once! Congratulations & Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:36 AM
- Paul, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Anne-Lise - and I love the picture! Agnes
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:57 PM
- Agnes, thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Such a cutie. Congrats on your win, Anne. ;)
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:56 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:47 PM
This is such a cute one. LOVED the footles too Congratulations :)
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:25 PM
- Nice that you like it, Darren - Thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Oh so cute and I loved the pic too, many congrats on your top spot Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:22 PM
- Thanks for my win, Jan :) - A fun contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Cute one..There once was a song that said, "Who'll put the bell on the old cat's tail?," said the wise old mouse..Enjoyed reading your footles..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:23 PM
- Thanks for a lovely comments and your valuable visit, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
B. Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 4:21 PM
I feel like the mouse. Anytime I am near a cat I am scared to death. They sense the fear and won't leave me alone. However, I did enjoy the footle :)
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:59 PM
- I'm afraid of cats too Carol .... but cats love me :))) - Thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duggan Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 1:37 AM
This is so cute Ann Lise, funny because we have caught two this week by trap, no use waiting for the cat to catch them, in fact we have two useless cats. hope you are well and enjoying the weekend, take care.....Vera
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments, dear Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:07 AM
LOL so cute!!!
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Arthur, thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Grasso Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Cute! I like it Anne-Lise! ...Fran
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments, Francis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 2:16 PM
love the cat-and-mouse race, lol!.. a funny read for this weekend, anne.. happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:48 AM
- Nette, thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Oh..lol...a fun one...have a nice weekend
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:40 AM
- Tim, thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Haha! Poor mouse/ In the house/ ... Was fat/ Now is flat! A good one dear Anne-Lise! Much enjoyed!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:40 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 2:46 AM
So so nice... Loved that pic too.., A big 7...Good luck with the contest...
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:39 AM
- Supraja, thanks for friendly visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Lots of fun, an excellent footle!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:37 AM
- Thanks Armand, for friendly visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:41 AM
oh yours is too fun! You made me giggle out loud with your delightful imagination and I love to laugh and/or giggle. Enjoyable and cute work! CayCay
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:37 AM
- CayCay, thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
James Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Loved this one, great write!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:37 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and lovely comments, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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