Who Is Knocking On My Door, Now

Let me tell you a story about my Christmas, past, present and future. (All nice, yes sad, but no naughty in sight) ____________________ It was midnight when I turned off the Christmas lights, Me and my cats had snuggled in bed, all cozy; Then there was a knock in the middle of the night. A knock on my door and there was a girl quite lovely, The pain reflected in her eyes was soul shattering; Me and my cats had snuggled in bed. All cozy. She told me she was my Christmas past weeping, We held each other remembering all the past sorrow; The pain reflected in her eyes was soul-shattering. She left saying there would be other knocks to follow, I answered and it was a young woman, who was me; We held each other, remembering, all the past sorrow. She was beautiful but her soul was a dreadful broken plea, Old the woman who came next, but with a soul at peace; I answered the knock- and it was a young woman, who was me. She was beautiful, but her soul was a dreadful broken-plea, Me and my cats, had snuggled in bed, all cozy; Old, the woman, who came next, but with a soul at peace, Then, there was a knock- in the middle of the night. ___________________________ Who is knocking on my door, now? Could that be death! (Well, I am not answering) _______________________________ December 16, 2015 Terzanelle For the contest, Who Is Knocking On My Door Sponsor, Tammy Reams First Place
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January 8, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Nice win. LINDA
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thank you Linda
Kimathi Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Congrats for opening the year with a top placement BW! ;-)
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:16 AM
Teddy thanks so much for the congrats ~
Nyaga Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:28 PM
A beautiful piece.. congratulation on your WIN
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Lewis, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
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January 4, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Skat
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January 3, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, very good poem Very well thought of and written xx
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January 3, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, very good poem Very well thought of and written xx
Salehi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Very nice
La France Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Pashang, thank for visiting and for the nice ~
Haight Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Such a wonderful poem, BW, so well-written and so very touching. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Sandra, thanks for the wonderful, the congratulations and the hugs ~
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Congratulations on your win--good job with this form Janice
La France Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Janice, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Cheema Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Constance, you always make my soul weep and make me wish I could do something to heal you. Love, my dear....
La France Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Balveen, your compassion is beautiful, will I ever be healed, this is doubtful, I will take my sorrow to the grave ~
Cheema Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Hugs for a lifetime....
La France Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Oh Balveen, I sure could use a hug, thanks so much for being my poetry friend ~
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:48 AM
A very touching write Broken Wings - another form I must try:-) hugs Jan xx7
La France Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Jan, thank you for your visit and comment, so appreciated ~
Leake Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 3:23 PM
This piece really touches you deeply BK, Very well written indeed!!! Good luck in the competition Best Wishes Kevin
La France Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Kevin, thank you so much for visiting my poem, and for the compliment and support, appreciated ~
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December 16, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Beautiful , intelligent poem great write as always my dear...
La France Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 12:59 PM
Dalia thank you for the visit
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