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Who Is Fooling Who

Once more I hear those tales Uttered with potent persuasion In the quest for self-preservation Half-truths and half lies Lots of lows but yet no highs I don’t know who to believe I have my vote to give Who is gonna receive?

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Allan Kazembe

Date: 4/26/2014 5:22:00 AM

it's really confusing to see they are back now just to get the crown; later to disappear when they have it...nice piece

John Pen
Date: 4/28/2014 1:31:00 AM

Thats just the way it is

Terry O'Leary

Date: 4/9/2014 12:36:00 PM

Yeah, John... well, whoever receives your vote... it's certain, we'll get shafted... :-( Terry (good poem!)

John Pen
Date: 4/25/2014 12:51:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Terry

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/4/2014 7:50:00 PM

Let me first welcome you to the soup, and i next have to say great job on this poem, i will be looking forward to reading more from you in the future. cheri also thank you for your great comment fellow souper. have a great day

John Pen
Date: 4/25/2014 12:52:00 AM

Thanks

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2014 10:12:00 AM

Well and persuasively expressed. Is it too much to ask for a clean electoral campaign!! Good thing we have a mind to judge and decide! // paul

John Pen
Date: 4/25/2014 12:51:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/2/2014 9:58:00 AM

An acute conception of politics and politicians! As long as the good wouldn't govern the bad will have the upper hand but who is good or who is bad only you my friend can say! Delightful and true poem!

John Pen
Date: 4/3/2014 8:06:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Demetrios