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Who Is At Loss

time is running fast,coming close mother's ask would i have to cry for another loss our life's are not secured, we slain ourselve with sword forgetting our most powerful weapon is words if a war begins are we save or just driving ourselves to the grave who is at loss? when we know that our words are shaper than our swords.

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Date: 11/29/2024 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:43:00 AM
Alpha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 5:03:00 PM
Alpha, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing --Skat:)
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