Carole Duet Poet Free verse

Who I Am - Revised

Who I am - Revised

Who I Am 
I am your prisoner of love 
bound to forgive you. 
I tried to escape 
but still I pursued you. 

Let's take pleasure in our youth 
and the freedom of truth. 
How easily my emotions gush out 
as I learn what love is about. 

And I'm on my knees 
as I beg you please. 
Love me too. 
I am bound to you. 

I have no pride. 
Be my bride. 
Hear my song. 
It's to you I belong. 


A Collaboration by: Collins Cp and Carole Duet

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Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2017 at 4:21 PM wow, the woman proposing. We've come a long way, baby! This is a gem. Collins did a great job with you. Carole Duet May 31, 2017 at 6:19 PM Hi Andrea! I'm glad you liked the poem but the "woman" was not proposing in this poem. The guy was. I was just helping Collins with the poem. However, he informed me that he was not actually ready to propose to the woman he loved but he liked the poem. So, it's "just a poem". lol Carole

Carol B. May 10, 2017 at 5:41 PM I really love this collaboration Carole. Raw emotions exposed in this piece. Loved it :) Carole Duet May 12, 2017 at 2:06 PM Thank you, Carol. Carole Duet

White Wolf May 3, 2017 at 11:10 PM I nearly missed this little beauty! Excellent collab guys! 7+ Carole Duet May 5, 2017 at 3:25 PM Thanks, Wolf!

Cheryl Hoffman May 1, 2017 at 8:14 PM Very awesome amorous collaboration Carole and Collins; good luck in the contest!~Che :) Carole Duet May 2, 2017 at 12:19 AM Thank you Cheryl. Carole Duet

Becca Teagan May 1, 2017 at 9:00 AM wow this is a lovely collaboration, I love the word-play.. very nice! Carole Duet May 1, 2017 at 12:30 PM Thank you, Becca. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet

Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 8:25 AM Really nice collaboration. The message here of love and longing is strong and the stanzas are seamless between both poets. Nicely done Carole and Collins. Carole Duet May 1, 2017 at 12:29 PM Thanks, Chris. Glad you liked it. Carole